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Literature Text
Nothingness.................
A black abyss of cold loneliness.
Lifeless.........empty
Like how I've felt since you left.
Life wasn't fair
...not like it ever is.
But this time.... this time......
The hurt feels so much worse.
'Cause you made me believe
in all your stupid lies.
Made me believe
that all WE had to do was try.
But now I've suffocated,
.......chocked on the very hope you gave me.
And babe, like me
time doesn't forgive.
So.....I'll sit, suffocating to nothingness
Cursing your name
.......................................for eternity.
A black abyss of cold loneliness.
Lifeless.........empty
Like how I've felt since you left.
Life wasn't fair
...not like it ever is.
But this time.... this time......
The hurt feels so much worse.
'Cause you made me believe
in all your stupid lies.
Made me believe
that all WE had to do was try.
But now I've suffocated,
.......chocked on the very hope you gave me.
And babe, like me
time doesn't forgive.
So.....I'll sit, suffocating to nothingness
Cursing your name
.......................................for eternity.
Inspired by my friend CookitheLex's poem, "Suffocate" enjoy :3
© 2008 - 2024 sasuchick33
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I enjoyed the poem. I can feel your pain.
Keep writing.
Keep writing.